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Tuesday, 13 May 2014

My holiday recount


Holiday writing
  
Matarangi#1


Splish! Splash! “argh” don’t do that. it was a hot summers day at matarangi on the beach, there was an enormous amount of people, The adults were sunbathing(most of them), the kids were running around playing games, making sandcastles and playing in the water. “ooh its cold” said shivering Tyrone “ I’m hoping out” so he walks up to his towel and sunbathes. 10 minutes later bj comes and lies down onto his towel and sun bathes. then it starts to rain so we go home. 
the end 
By Tyrone

4 comments:

  1. Great writing and punctuation Tyrone from Ben Jenkins

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  2. Great writing and punctuation Tyrone from Ben Jenkins

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  3. sounds great it actually kind of sounds like my one ah whoops it is my one
    FROM TYRONE!!!!!!!
    by the way I'm awesome

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